The SFX were pretty damn good!! I like the reverb! I would have cut it a little different, but I didn't hear any hard cut. Star's volume could have been a touch louder...
The dialogue is a little campy for my taste, but still FUN!!! LOL
Acting was great on both sides, although at times it seemed you held back in your acting Silas.
FOR YOUR FIRST AUDIO!!! You did a REALLY GOOD JOB!!! Keep it up!